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great job on her face again holly, it looks beautiful and tone. she looks so adorable and cuddley in the 3rd panel, i could just hug her....oh wait o_o shes naked. btw, BOOBEH!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :x
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This page is fantastic. The writing, the transition, the position she's in the last panel. Lovely :D
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Ladies and Gentlemen: Leila has left the building! And done so beautifully. Very nice Holly. :D :ymapplause:
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is it bad of a old man say she looks even more sexy in the position after she felt her spirit leave and lovable in the last panel..


don't look at me like that i cant help but love her the way she looks so serene in this page as well as gorgeous yes i know she young in this flash back. but.. hey, hey put that down... there no need to spray me

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Dun die on us! :ympray:
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*Gibbs-slap* Considering she's telling this to Seraphis I dare say dying isn't on the agenda. :p
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Actually, dying might just be what she has to do at this point to become what she became.
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nah. Even then she's only MOSTLY dead!
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So she dies and...what, makes a deal with Death? She gets to come back, but fails to stipulate the details? Gah! Annie, what did you do!

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