Last Breath
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Re: Last Breath
"True Love gives its all, and asks naught in return."
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Re: Last Breath
great job on her face again holly, it looks beautiful and tone. she looks so adorable and cuddley in the 3rd panel, i could just hug her....oh wait o_o shes naked. btw, BOOBEH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Last Breath
This page is fantastic. The writing, the transition, the position she's in the last panel. Lovely
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Re: Last Breath
Ladies and Gentlemen: Leila has left the building! And done so beautifully. Very nice Holly.
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Re: Last Breath
is it bad of a old man say she looks even more sexy in the position after she felt her spirit leave and lovable in the last panel..
don't look at me like that i cant help but love her the way she looks so serene in this page as well as gorgeous yes i know she young in this flash back. but.. hey, hey put that down... there no need to spray me
don't look at me like that i cant help but love her the way she looks so serene in this page as well as gorgeous yes i know she young in this flash back. but.. hey, hey put that down... there no need to spray me
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Re: Last Breath
Dun die on us!
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Re: Last Breath
*Gibbs-slap* Considering she's telling this to Seraphis I dare say dying isn't on the agenda.
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Re: Last Breath
Actually, dying might just be what she has to do at this point to become what she became.
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Re: Last Breath
nah. Even then she's only MOSTLY dead!
A good friend comforts you and talks you down when you are angry. A best friend skips along side you, carrying a baseball bat, and chanting, ‘Somebody’s gonna get it!"Aquila89 wrote:It's really nice how a conversation about linguistics overlaps with a debate about strap-ons.
And to keep for future reference:Chelvo56 wrote:Sorry, but when the sentence "It is wrong to go into a foreign country, take out your weapon and enforce your will there", coming from an US-diplomat, was generallly laughed at, you might want to think why.
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Re: Last Breath
So she dies and...what, makes a deal with Death? She gets to come back, but fails to stipulate the details? Gah! Annie, what did you do!
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