loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool I love these!! MOAR NAO!
Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight. gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*
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lol those where enjoyable
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Strip 03: Bonusyesterdayshero wrote:I love these!! MOAR NAO!
Oh boy...yesterdayshero wrote:gonna follow you on dA....*evil laugh*
yesterdayshero wrote:Anyway for the crit, I'd say your hands are a little too big, and the face look slightly werid sometimes but besides that its awesome, the expressions are tight.
Thanks, guys. I'll keep those in mind while working on the next one.redprincess wrote:lol those where enjoyable
You mean "Trololoolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool"?yesterdayshero wrote:loloolololololololoolololololololololololollololololololololololollolollool
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LOL that girl is awesome, so are they just for strips or are they part of something bigger?
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They're just for strips as of now. Those two have bigger roles from a different story I have, but I'll work on that later.
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I like it. Kinda want to see the bottom shadow on the nose of that silver haired girl, if I was being nitpicky.